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Save one last dance upon thy breeze,
For I, a leaf, doth fall for you.
O whipping wind! with gentle ease,
Twirl me softly, spin me true.

Glow strong! Glow bright, O setting sun!
Your dying rays a shadow cast
And I, a broken, little leaf,
Shall chill and fade to ground at last.

Sky so dark and night so fine,
The frost hath settled in my soul.
I'll keep this secret forever mine,
The last warm day I briefly stole.
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I'm in an Autumn mood. Wanted to write a little poem. Can't wait for Fall~.
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This poem was featured in our weekly feature, after it was suggested by ~crystelclear1104.

P2TM is designed to encourage more people to read and write poetry, including song lyrics, through a weekly feature: one main poem, with information about the poem and the poet, and links to two further poems. All these poems are suggested to me by deviants.

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*PumpkinSpice2891 Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the feature.
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Mood: Love ~Charwee3 Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow nice poem I love the way you've written it and it falls off the tongue so well. Brilliant.
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*PumpkinSpice2891 Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! It's the first poem I've written in years, actually, so I'm glad I conveyed it right. :)
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~gothchick913 Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this. its beautiful
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*PumpkinSpice2891 Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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~gothchick913 Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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Mood: Wow! ~crystelclear1104 Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You have a traditional style, yet the ideas expressed in this poem are so fresh. So beautiful :heart: I love it. Straight to my collections =D
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*PumpkinSpice2891 Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so very much!
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